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WhiteKnight Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 83NY |
Despair By WhiteKnight Fallen on the ground Always with a frown Will life ever turn around? Will I always be down? I struggle to stand But if I fall Where will I land? Things look different here They make me fear I am afraid of these unknown things Don’t let them come near. Please help me my friends Don’t let me come to the end I just can't understand Why life is so bad. It just makes me sad. The tears run down my cheeks I feel oh so weak. I just want to give up To put an end to this mess Why must I struggle so? I just cannot guess. I am sinking in the quagmire of despair, Is there hope anywhere? Do not reach out your hand, For how can you understand? I will just pull you From where you stand. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Oh White Knight very good poem and yes there is hope. I think we all have these days or weeks and sometimes months But it always gets better I can identify and relate to every word of your poem.You must always hang on no matter how thin the rope seems. And this is the right place to come to express these feelings. Jane |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
This was a good piece, i connected to it. I've felt this way myself alot...it always does get better, keep hope  " If who i am is what i have and what i have is lost, then who am I? " - unknown Tryps |
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