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Dark Poetry #3

In Nature's Prison

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

0 posted 2001-01-22 06:09 AM

Waves lapping
upon my heart
drowning my mind
tearing things apart.

Sun coerced
with the sky
and the clouds
covered my eyes.

Thunder played havoc
to hear, was a fight
lightening blocked my path
cornered, I accepted my plight.

24th December 2000

~ Tara ~

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

1 posted 2001-01-23 10:55 AM

taramw ... this piece touches all around the pain and/or anguish, but i want to know more ... what is the cause? ... obviously more that just the weather?

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

2 posted 2001-01-24 04:05 AM

Thanks for your reply MA Miller... yep, correct - wasn't just the weather

I wrote it when I was feeling really confused, annoyed with everything and feeling quite alone. A vast mixture of feelings all at once... felt quite strange at the time. Writing the above helped

Thanks!

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

3 posted 2001-01-25 01:39 AM

There is a mystery here, and I want to solve it

Tell me more!

Jerm

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

4 posted 2001-01-25 11:32 PM

Rain danced
upon lips sweet kisses
Scattering rainbows
Enticing wishes

Clouds part
in gentle sighs
As shafts of light
Guide your eyes

To blue skies
Where birds glide
Singing songs
To hearts alive

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

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