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Dark Poetry #3

Rat race break

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

0 posted 2001-01-20 09:16 PM

Lay me down gently
under the trees
Let the smell of eucalyptis
surround me.
Send me the bee
to buzz my ear
The songbirds chirp
I long to hear
Allow the sun
to rest on my face
Let me lie here
in coplete grace
As I take a break
from the rat race.

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

1 posted 2001-01-20 11:23 PM

You sound burnt out. You should have my job; we get to clear the bodies off the runway. Good work.

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

2 posted 2001-01-21 12:15 PM

Since i don't have job i cant relate to the rat race part, but school is a bummer and it takes too much out of me and sometimes i feel this way and i want a break fromall the stupid high school bull i have to deal with. very good i liked it

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

3 posted 2001-01-21 04:41 AM

Someone definitely needs a vacation

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2001-01-21 11:45 AM

"Blue" I have a small .EXE 3D file on my desk top that lets me go to that vacation anytime I want I can send it to you if you'd like. it's 421KB. but worth the look. just E me and let me know and anyone else.

joel@goldrush.com

Joel.
Oh and yes I loved the poem.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

5 posted 2001-01-21 05:11 PM

this was beautiful and peaceful,winter's always been my fave. but spring is starting to sound nice =] This reminds me of spring,lovely.

swampo

Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman

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