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leafseranade
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0 posted 2002-01-31 11:18 AM

snow falls into my eardrum
freezes up my brain
numbs my veins
my heart beat blocks
the blood flow frozen
my fridgid walk
snow falls into my eye lids
freezes up my sight
feel the fall
slow motion night


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Broken
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The woods
1 posted 2002-02-03 01:05 PM


Short and simple, yet not.

~Broken~

Base not your joy upon the deeds of others,
for what is given can be taken away. -Peter Steele
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2 posted 2002-02-04 09:59 AM

Short and sweet but has depth of feeling and meaning..nicely done

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