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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392


0 posted 2001-01-19 11:57 AM


For Just a While

Excuse me,
but may I have your mind
for just a while?
I seem to have daemons
screaming in my ears.
You walk in a mind
free of distortion.
I need a place to
perform a mental abortion.

Excuse me,
but may I please
wear your skin
for just a while?
You exist so beautifully
in perfected manly composition.
Eyes deeper than a liquid soul,
hair of scented locks
with skin lovelier than
an alabaster sculpture.

Excuse me,
But may I
Simply
Be
You?




"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

© Copyright 2001 a-alibaster (H.A.R.) - All Rights Reserved
dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
1 posted 2001-01-19 02:42 PM


Slightly creepy. Enjoyed the read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

He
Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41

2 posted 2001-01-19 04:01 PM


Your last stanza is an interesting point of view. Interesting read all the way through.


[This message has been edited by He (edited 01-19-2001).]

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