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Another Gloomy Day
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Another Gloomy Day |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Another Gloomy Day As I look out the window and feel the loneliness closing in on me, I watch as each drop lands upon the window ledge outside. Through the bay windows, the splatterings remind me of my life...seeping from the whole of me. As each day continues whether I wish for it to or not, the lack of you, your words, your insight (or is that incite...) pulls me under the gray. Hope is there, hidden within the swirls of darkness, watching me, every move I make, and often those I don't. Fever has almost cleared yet the heat of desires still rise at the oddest times, keeping me from clear thinking, and thoughts often run wild... I see myself as if in a commercial running through springs garden of fragrant blossoms, sheerness of dress captured by the breeze of my coursing to your waiting arms. I sigh at every grain of thought, every minute of the hour glassed before me in wait, and as time runs out, I keep into a "forever" hold by turning you over and over, knowing that time shall stand still, one day... and wipe away this gray... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I loved this Wynter..sensuous images..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I really liked this -Gin "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
I keep into a "forever" hold by turning you over and over, knowing that time shall stand still, one day... and wipe away this gray... it's only a concept we realize at this moment, time.....each of us alone, housed in these distinct bodies, we feel it with greater intensity when it's viewed in the reflection of someone else's eyes. excellent, wynter *S* Z Life is an adventure to be experienced |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This is good. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~V~ thanks bunches hon Gin I am glad you enjoyed Mirror Man...just the reflection I need Zyell..just want to see my reflection in someone elses eyes *s thanks all @}}--}--~ huggzz ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Liking the format here...very good write.. thanks for the read. KStrokes of ink, words, dreams like Waking mountains make intimate conversations With my shadow From 'Words in the Night' by Jeff Geddes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very feeling!!! |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
excellent write wynter...a heavy heart is needed to pen such words...hope it is enlightened soon for you...wanderer lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Severn- thank you, it was just a "free" feeling poem...*s Kathleen-every word...I felt *s huggzz wanderer- thank you for your kind thoughts *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wynter, Do you know how much I liked this? Very much indeed especially...to wipe away the grey. So cool! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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