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Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-01-19 12:05 PM

Embarking on a Journey
The path to endless love
Waiting for that "Special"
Someone to fill your Weakend
Heart
This Journey set before us
Is a hard road to travel on
What lies ahead
No one knows
Whether it be our soul
Mates destined for us all
Or the loneliness
We all have come to know?
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I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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jennyanydots
Junior Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 15

1 posted 2001-01-19 12:07 PM

This was really good Temptress.. everyone is looking for the special someone.

Jen

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

2 posted 2001-01-19 01:34 PM

It may be 1 long, uncertain and tedious journey, but i am sure we will all get there one day ... and perhaps we can then look back & see that it was all worth it?
This had been a good read ...

He
Junior Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 41

3 posted 2001-01-19 04:11 PM

Indeed who does know what tomorrow brings. As all ponder the vagaries of life, of whihc you express the most vital of all things human.

Well said

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

4 posted 2001-01-22 04:48 PM

temptress*moon:

This is a great poem! You made me think. Yes it is a hard journey and you may fall along the way either in love or out of love. Either way without that journey life would not be the same. As the others said...good read.

Take care.

~Lisa~

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

5 posted 2001-01-22 05:00 PM

Hey! Forgot to tell you I liked your quote also.

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

6 posted 2001-12-11 02:08 AM

ahh..yes I do miss you, Temptress Moon!

wherever you may be. Enjoyed this shortly and simply!

I am many.

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-12-12 03:53 AM

Nicely done.

Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

8 posted 2001-12-29 12:52 PM

Isn't that the truth!!--

ELMO

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

9 posted 2002-01-14 02:27 PM

well theres not much left to say except great read and that i'm on my journey and its going through the hells right now. hope to read more real soon.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

10 posted 2002-01-14 09:32 PM

There are many hills and valleys on this journey we call life.I keep going forward just to see what lie beyond the next bend in the road.

paladin

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

11 posted 2002-01-19 05:02 PM

Wow, I enjoyed this piece. Very nice rythym and... what's the word I'm looking for? Organizing? Sectioning? Anyhow... it flowed well, and it was an enjoyable read.

Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely,
Titus

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

12 posted 2002-01-21 08:09 PM

Painfully true, but well written.

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