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Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

0 posted 2001-01-16 02:26 PM

A heart that is stolen,
A will that is broken,
A mind that is forsaken,
A soul, now fallen.

When will this pain be over?
When will Time lend its healing hand?
Could this chastened spirit ever be forgiven,
And regain its place in heaven?

firecrakker
Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 235
Virginia

1 posted 2001-01-16 03:24 PM

We seem to have mirrored thoughts, here!

You say so much with so few words!! Very well done!

Sheila

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

2 posted 2001-01-18 05:57 AM

Hey Sheila,
Thanks for replying to my posting. I am glad that you can relate to this one

Your comments are heartfelt.

Cheers.

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

3 posted 2001-01-18 08:03 AM

Well done, verve. I think just about all of us have been at this point once or twice in our lifetimes, written well.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

4 posted 2001-01-18 08:38 AM

nice, i enjoyed this very much. i think that a lot of people have shared these feelings i know i have many times

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

5 posted 2001-01-18 12:44 PM

I agree with everyone on this one i think you have captured the way a majority of people have felt, including me...Great write!
Temp!

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

6 posted 2001-01-19 01:30 PM

Hey dragonpoe, Ginners & Temp,

Thank you so much for all your kind replies and that you guys thought well of this.

And it is comforting to know that I am not alone ... *huggies*

Cheers!

He
Junior Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 41

7 posted 2001-01-19 04:14 PM

Tie seems far too often to wait or hasten us beyond what we want. Perhaps it is its nature. Something I believe all can relate to.

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

8 posted 2001-01-20 02:57 AM

a fallen angel, perhaps(?) ... nice read ... easy.

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