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Brush of your wing |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
In the sea of love I have swam the oceans of distress and mayhem, searching for that life line of light and fair. Drinking upon the waters of ill taste in forgotten loves, seeking the one I loved most for none to compare. Oh reach to me fair maiden, a brush from your feather and light not so as to drown yourself but to help a wolf in flight. upon this floundering sole, hold dearest to your bosom they that are of kin, but seek out a light within this darkness. To began again. ------------------------------- To my white dove (my wife) Joel I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the words you have written Joel...James |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thanks James it's good to be home again. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
This is really beautiful, Joel! Have you showed her?  Sheila |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very neat joel..i like...  the imagery was awesome..such pictures of a dark moment in big waters..only to be rescued by the only winged one who could rescue the wolf... WOWWY!  love it! hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
It's good to read your work again...excellent imagery and a beautiful dedication to your wife Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
This was a very beautiful piece... Hope to see more.. I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Firecracker, I've had ??? writers block for about 6 mounts and have been fighting it ever day, and no not yet I will tonight, I'll send her ?? one of the cards we can send. she has her pc also. haha ----------------------------- Thanks G, this is my style misspelling and all. haha you all know the feelings and that's all I care about. -------------------------- Thanks Melissa, and yes it's good to be home again, I look forward to interaction with you all again. -------------------------------- T*Moon, thank you, I hope to see more also, I had to stop fighting the block, and what I figured that I was suppose to write, "EXPECTATIONS" We place on ourselves, haha. Ah well I'm blabbing, I can do that I'm getting older. hahahahhahah HHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWLLLLLLLLLLL Thank you all again. Joel the wolf. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Joel: Hey! You're back. Cool! Like this poem a lot. Great writing here. I think she will like it a lot. |
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Fallen Angel of Darkness Junior Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 26Among the Shadows |
Joel Once again your work is just beyond belief. You have such a talent! I'm glad that your poem ended on a light note as well. It's nice to see some happier endings in here once in awhile. Take care. ~* Megs *~< !signature--> "Those who are faithful know only the trivial side of love: it is the faithless who know love's tragedies." Oscar Wilde [This message has been edited by Fallen Angel of Darkness (edited 01-18-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Congratulations to a real man, love you Joel, much happiness to you and your wife! Kathleen |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Oh how beautiful! Love the ending! Simply beautiful. ( I bet all of us female poets and readers are just swooning over this one. Lucky wife, you have) With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
fractal007: one can only hope, as I do. She has like most all I've written. Thank you. --------------- ~* Megs *~ you hit the block I had on the nail head, (being in a happer place I thought I had to just write of butterflies. all the time, and show that I was happy, my writing just wouldn't come out. Anyway working now. Thanks it is good to be home. ---------------------- Rose, I've droped in on you a few times, haha felt like a 007 myself, knowing I've had a block and fighting it. haha real man? no just a man. and real lucky, haha love you to kid. ---------------------------- dragonpoe: no I'm the lucky one to have her. And thank you for the swooning. hahaha ---------------------------------- I'll be bouncing around to read everybodys poems again to all thank you for the welcome back. Joel hhhhhhhhhhooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwlllllllll hahahaha I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome back, Joel. It is once again nice to see your work.  and BTW... very nice coming back post, I enjoyed it.Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thank you Mags I have miss you all. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
it does this heart good, to know that romance is alive and well....so very good! *(S* Z |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Joel, missed you heaps Daddio Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Z, romance, yes I do what I can with what I have. thank you. ----------------------- Just a short reminder to the men out there, you think the points build up and last forever? I've got news for you they dissolve at midnight every night. So that means you must build them up every day. --------------------------- Isis, What can I say but I have missed you so much. My cyber daughter. (((((((((you))))))))) hugs. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
All I can say is....BEAUTIFUL!! Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thank you "A" Your short words do mean a lot. Beautiful only from the inspiration, my wife (white Dove) --------------------------- This it to all who don't know that my White Dove is not the same as in the forums. I have called my lady "White Dove" a long time before I came to D.P. And have written about her many times here in D.P. Just so you don't make a mistake. haha Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Terrific Joel !! Yeah, great to read your work again!!! Take care.~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thanks Tara, it is I just can't say this enough "But it is good to be home again." I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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