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MysticWonders
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since 2000-12-11
Posts 60
Massapequa NY

0 posted 2001-01-15 03:54 PM




In the Dark of the Night
My fears come to play
Alone in my room
Fighting them away
Frightened and Lonely
It's you that i call
Take away the pain and the
Fears that posess me
It's You that i need
To comfort and protect me
In my weakess moment
I called upon you
To help me get through the
Hurt that im going through
You gave me advice. helped
Me get through the Dark night
But what i really needed was
You by my wilting side  


© Copyright 2001 Danyel L Azar - All Rights Reserved
Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
1 posted 2001-01-15 05:14 PM


god, i know this feeling all too well, youre depressed and sad and call the one person who can help, they cant be next to you for what ever reason or poor excuse but they give you just enough hope to deal for a while.  very sad, very true, great write!
WinterTalon
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since 2001-01-14
Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA
2 posted 2001-01-16 05:01 PM


Ouch... yeah, sounds like a familiar story.  *grumbles*

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~


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