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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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silken red woven thread fragranced dew covering you my heart is dead lover's empty bed crying for you is all I can do |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is so heart rending for so few words...it's quite moving... hugs K Strokes of ink, words, dreams like Waking mountains make intimate conversations With my shadow From 'Words in the Night' by Jeff Geddes |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
*is in agreement with Severn* I've always been told that the fewer the words, the more feeling they possess. I'd never actually seen anything that proved it until now. ~What is sometimes viewed as an ending, is often a new beginning.~ |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
I would have to concur with the other replies. The stanza's are short, but the impact is there. It's amazing how you can say so much with so little.  to you,Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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