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Dark Poetry #3

The Last Day

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2001-01-14 11:56 PM

For a single moment
In the day
I felt the love
That you say
Yet a new star
Has died
As a tear fell
That I cried
In an instant
It became cold
Shivering fingers
A mask so bold
Hiding behind
The sad glare
You no longer love me
In a lonely stare
Feeling the world
Slipping away
No more breathe
On this miserable day

No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

1 posted 2001-01-15 12:52 PM

Mags, this is beautifully written, however, I think you read too much into what I write...please don't

Love,
Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

2 posted 2001-01-15 01:41 AM

Losing someone's love is never easy... *sighs*
Interesting style you have here though. Good work.

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