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Niche
New Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 2
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-01-13 11:04 PM





We arrive..
Naked and wet.
Screaming for
approval.

As we depart..
in similar fashion,
uncertain of
acceptance.

© Copyright 2001 Rowdy - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2001-01-13 11:48 PM


Yep that pretty much sums up my 29 years of life!  

Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
2 posted 2001-01-14 08:32 PM


Now now Mags, you know you've been MORE than accepted in this heart.  However, this one, though short, spoke the absolutel truth about human existance.  Good work.

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2001-01-14 10:10 PM


Welcome to Passions and the dark forum.  That is all so many crave - acceptance, just hope most are strong enough to see there is so much more than that to this life.
Wonderfully said..
Check your email for a little something..
Isis


*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


Zyell
Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121
USA
4 posted 2001-01-14 10:15 PM


lot of truth in these simple words
~grin~

thank you,
Z

Life is an adventure
to be experienced

Scarlet Lady
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest
5 posted 2001-01-15 12:19 PM


Great first post!  Simply put, but so full of the truth!  Welcome to passions!  
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

6 posted 2001-01-15 12:49 PM


~A striking write! Well done. *Peace.
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