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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
I suppose its all a bad dream remembering your past schemes trusting you fully believing without doubt All that our life seemed. The nightmare is still here hidden deep within where I try to hide all my sins. Yours Im having trouble fitting in. I watch you carefully even the little things a year was to long and some say it was more I would have never known had the situation not grown so obscure. Hatred flying between friends that once cared Shattering lives we all shared. I see her watch you I know she'll be back determination she does not lack. It will be different next time around maybe your secret you'll take to the ground. as you should know it all comes back around. Misiterpretations of things that I see Things you're telling me really can't be. I believed you truely so long ago but now I just wonder am I again being snowed. [This message has been edited by bluebrdy65 (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well im new too this area of passions but i dont think it is very diffrent to tell you that you have one excellent poem there. it was wonderfully written and maybe because i can relate to it i think the story is one very real. this was the first impresion i got from this board, im definetly staying around for more.  San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
OH this was most excellent. For a moment, I thought we were sharing a brain after I read this. Recently, my poetry has related to the same subject matter and I went through a similar experience back in 99. I cherish this poem. One of the best reads I have ever encountered here. I only hope that the one you wrote this about has read it as well...they need to!!!! AWESOME! Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It takes a lot to trust again, and some sins can never be forgotten, forgiven maybe, but not forgotten. This was truly awesome as Jeremy said above. I too hope this is just a piece of writing and not something you are dealing with now... Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Whoa! Been there done this just not too long ago! I hope you can find a way to heal and get on with your life. I know I am trying to do that myself. Great expression in your poem. I enjoyed it. Take care! |
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