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...in my boxers...

0 posted 2002-01-29 06:45 PM


Find Another Fool,
I'm drowing in a pool
of my own blood.
Join the club...

No more needles;
covered by beattles.
No more nightmares,
no more stares.

The poison flowing through all,
hear freedom's call.
Push the demon aside,
never again the need to hide.

Feel freedom's bliss,
feel freedom's kiss.
Feel freedom's bliss,
feel freedom's kiss.

The rush of freedom
overpowers you kingdom.
Nothing compares,
nothing compares.

Freedom's song playing loud:
do you hear?

© Copyright 2002 Daniel Redding - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-29 06:47 PM


This is for all struggling with any addictions, whatever it may be. Enjoy as you wish.

Titus

Naustious From The Ups And Downs Of This Earthly Existence.

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2 posted 2002-01-30 01:08 AM


"Pukka"? You have that one your critique now? Oy, my friend... what can I say? Excellent work! I just... like it!

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3 posted 2002-01-30 06:28 AM


Great work Titus, I really loved this piece thank you for sharing such a wonderful read with us

Andrew says:
  *your so cute*
Skyfire says:
Cute?????? Oh, okay. But only from you

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4 posted 2002-01-30 04:13 PM


Thanks

Titus

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