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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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Gonna get smashed to smitherenes blood splattered until no one see's my pain no one will seem to care I know that is where it is headed! And, I am so scared To believe in "us" I feel it coming already The let down is sinking Even as I write But this time, I do not know If, I can handle the smash.... the crash of my heart the trash of my dream and the reality seemed and it will not go on now What won't go on? You lived for me And..... I lived for you |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
 This definitely is full of hurt. I hope you find your smile again. Definitely different from the last one of yours I just read  Great work here, I enjoy reading your material.Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
I'm new here *scowls at the big NEW MEMBER label* but from what I've read, I can tell you're going to be one of my favorite poets. |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
firejerm.....isn't it wild how us poets can go from one extreme to another. And just think I wrote this the same day! eeeeek! Thank you for your compliment...as I said before your the one who writes incredible stuff...I just take a stab at it and see what comes out! PoeticEnchantress.....Welcome!! And don't worry about the "new member" label....it will be gone before you know it! Thanks for the compliment and I hope to read your work as well. I am sure you will love it here, the people are awesome and incredibly talented. Take care! |
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