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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2001-01-12 10:42 PM


Just once I want to hold you,
Be ensconed in your passionate embrace,
Just once I want to caress you,
And trail my fingers across your unshaved face.

Just once I want you to tell me,
Your truths disguised and hiding within,
Just once I want to hear the words,
From your soul without that empowering grin.

Just once make it all better,
Just this once put me first,
Just be yourself with me,
Don't make things any worse.

Speak of your love,
Reveal your jealousy,
Reveal the man hiding beneath the armour,
Before WE sink into obscurity.

Just once I could save you,
In every way a woman can save a man,
Just one magical night,
No fear of light, no darkness, no shame.

I offer up my world to you,
But I'm too weak to make the final call,
So will you be there for me for real,
When I eventually stumble and fall.

Just once I hope you are....




*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


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Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
1 posted 2001-01-13 01:05 AM



Hi Isis ...

My ... such sweet longing ... Heartfelt.
Great work you have here.


~regina

Sven
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2 posted 2001-01-13 08:22 PM


you know that I'll always be there for you my friend. . .

always. . .  

beautiful. . . just wonderful. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

bluebrdy65
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Gladys,
3 posted 2001-01-13 08:54 PM


yes Isis beatuful wonderful and heartfelt
it got to me
Great poem
Jane

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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4 posted 2001-01-14 03:17 AM


This seems like a possible to me Isis...go for it..just once...ha..ha..James
Isis
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5 posted 2001-01-14 06:02 PM


Thanks everyone  
James, I'd have to believe a little more I think  
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
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6 posted 2001-01-14 11:47 PM


Wow girl.....I could of written this!  We must be talking about the same person.  Seriously.....I know this all too well.  I sure hope you keep your chin up, because your one incredible lady and poet!  Great poem lady.  Luv to you!
WinterTalon
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since 2001-01-14
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Brooksville, KY, USA
7 posted 2001-01-14 11:56 PM


Sorrowfully beautiful...

~What is sometimes viewed as an ending, is often a new beginning.~

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2001-01-15 06:25 PM


Thanks Illusion luv to you too hon  
Poetic Enchantress, welcome again and thanks.  It always has and always be a sorrowful situation for anyone dealing with it..
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
9 posted 2001-01-15 06:27 PM


Sven not you babe!!  Not you!!!!!     (though I wish LOL)   Lovya..
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


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