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Loneliness |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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People always watching me Yet tonight I feel alone Lost in my own little world The cause will never be known I look up into the stars For some light for me to see They vanish into thin air Will the darkness always be? I wonder around the place Walking upon the hard ground Wanting to scream so loudly Yet never making a sound Feeling so trapped and scared In my body, yes I do Aching to stop this inner pain And stop feeling so *darn* blue No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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insanepoet New Member
since 2001-01-11
Posts 3Springfield, Ohio, USA |
Mags, I must have just missed you tonight, I had to go on a call  Great work once again  I tried to post under my own handle and it said my posting priveledges had been removed or I didn't have permission to post Anyway, great work! Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them"-Edgar Allen Poe |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This poem conveys some very dark feelings and images. I hope that you come out from this depression. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I know the feeling when it is hard to lift yourself out of the funk. Hope venting in the poem helped a bit??.. Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Mags ... As always, you seem to be able to put into words what i feel ... Your works are always a joy to read. Great work once again. ~regina. |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Hey girl...it has been awhile since I have read any of your poetry (or any at all for that matter). Sorry you feel like this, but boy can I relate!! As usual, your pain and lifes problems have brought out the talent in you. Great read. I sincerly wish the best for such a great lady! Take care!< !signature--> "I think you are looking for that right one and if they don't fit, then you punish them to fit what you want!" "Change comes when the pain to stand still becomes greater than the pain to move." [This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I hope you turn from blue to yellow sun soon. Smiles Joy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I often feel this way unless I have someone special in my life...James |
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