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insanepoet
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since 2001-01-11
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Springfield, Ohio, USA

0 posted 2001-01-11 11:43 PM


The cool breeze whispers
Some sort of mystery
Wondering if she realizes
How much she means to me,
I look to the sky
But she is not there
I wonder if my angel
Truly does care.
I hide in the night
Don't ask me why
I look for my angel
But she does not fly,
Where is she now
And what has she done
When our two hearts
And all become one?
The trees bend in agony
For they do not see
What it is
That her love means to me,
I don't understand
Her beautiful wings
ANd when I'm with her
My heart truly sings.
But here I am alone
All beaten and scarred
Everything I felt before
Is just out there so far,
Am lost in thought
Without her touch
Does she know
That I love her so much?
I'm almost cried out
Can't take much more
I pray for her
To walk through my door,
But right now she's absent
And I don't know why
That my Wild Angel
Will not fly.

Jeremy T. Sellers
*I do not understand why I had been banished here, expression is not a crime, so what is there to fear?*



© Copyright 2001 Jeremy T. Sellers - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2001-01-12 01:07 AM


Hmmmmm well I think I have been gone a little too long this time, cause I am completely lost here on this *banish* stuff.
ANYWAYS  yet another beautiful poem, Jeremy!  

Sending kisses your way,
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
2 posted 2001-01-12 11:23 AM


I think that this was a beautiful poem and i really liked it, a lot.
JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
3 posted 2001-01-13 02:01 AM


It seems like you can never find your angel when you need her/ him. They can be in the most unexpected places as well.

Joy

Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2001-01-13 12:39 PM


Beautiful poem. A great read.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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