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DreamSeeker
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 72


0 posted 2001-01-11 10:51 PM


       No matter where You Go
            Or What You Do
         There is but One Verse
             That Holds its Truth

Speak Not To Me
Of Sacred Rites
Nor the Coming
Of the Lord

Lights that Fade
In Widows Hearts
Where the Fruit
Of Man is Stored

Speak Not to Me
Of Gentleness
Nor Love for
All Around

For those
Who would
But Stab My Back
Around Me Do Abound

So It Is Written
And GladlySadly Done
Forevermore
Tears of Heaven Ignore




The Song That Is Soul
It Reaches Defiant
Giving It In And Given
Calling All Souls Rise


© Copyright 2001 DreamSeeker - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-01-12 05:21 AM


Hmmm...a melancholy one from you. And, gasp, it's capped!   Tch...

It's very sad. You should rejoice, because, well...hm. We will find a reason for you to ok? Go read some more banana jokes or something.

Hugs L I

K

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2001-01-12 12:40 PM


Hmmmmm yes quite different but very well understood.  Good read here.

Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2001-01-12 10:30 PM


Beautifully and differently written but understood all the while... Great stuff hon
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
4 posted 2001-01-13 01:27 AM


Hi Dreamseeker,


Hm ... this sounds a little angry and somewhat cynical to me ...
Was that what was intended in here? I dunno ... but i really liked this one  


~regina.

DreamSeeker
Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72

5 posted 2001-01-13 02:42 AM


My thanks for your reading and comments all.

This, this is but a sad truism I penned when I saw the world through 15 year old eyes.

Unfortunately no
Tears no Trying
Time nor Mankind
Has Ever Proved it Wrong

Weep for Life
Pray for Death
Reach in Dying to What
We Could Become

IllusionsLifeIsAgreedAsReal


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The Song That Is Soul
It Reaches Defiant
Giving It In And Given
Calling All Souls Rise



[This message has been edited by DreamSeeker (edited 01-13-2001).]

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