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Ascending (part 1)
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Ascending (part 1) |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
I sleep I climb For a dream cannot lie It is pulled from the inside out to breathe I follow the myriad more then three dimensional pathway your words Have sliced through life The mountain unclimable smiliing I proceed The trail invisibly clear completely unmarked to most I see with ease Or does the flora gauge me I linger at a footprint study the single droplet on blosssoms reach pondering tear drop dew drop epiphany song there is no difference at all onward upward the sky thunders its challenge my fever to reach the summit For there it is said the Mountain Goddess speaks to Heaven in unguarded moments Humbled I ascend... < !signature--> The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise [This message has been edited by DreamSeeker (edited 01-10-2001).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Humbled? Why ever?  You know what I think Mr Imp, I think that epiphanies find us in the strangest places. I know they never come, nor an other happy accidents (heh) by looking. That is one great thing about life...we have so many corners, we never run out of them to turn. I am mightily enmighted by this poem... K |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is very nice DS, especially liked this .... I follow the myriad more then three dimensional pathway your words I need a lullaby a kiss goodnight Angel sweet love of my life Oh, I need this ~Natalie Merchant~ |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Thank you Dark Angel, I am glad you enjoyed. Now K you know the fierce voice of the fiery mountain does indeed inspire. Thus I trek onward. For this is merely part 1. The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is a most wonderful read "Humbled I ascend..." simply words with a strong meaning magnificent Thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dream Seeker, What bounty! What bliss! is seen in your rite of this What wonder! What rapture! you artfully capture Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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