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I'll be good.. |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180
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I know you're afraid Afraid of getting hurt You say that you don't dare to love, that you hold it back, that you push it away. But don't you know, you can't run, you can't escape from your heart... You just have to face it..Stay Strong And I won't hurt you I won't let go I don't want to leave you alone I would do you no harm¨ I just want you to smile I'll make you forget All the things you remember too well I've been there too but now, there's a difference with you I don't know what to say... I love you and I know you love me Isn't that enough? You shouldn't try to hold back love.. Surely, that will overtake you It will do you no good.. Just let it go Let me care Let me love you Don't worry so much We could be together dancing in the sun.. I just want you to be happy. Now you're not. Let me be near you Let me see what's inside you I already know you too well It's to late to throw me away I'll always come back Please Don't you see? Don't you know it? ..What could be Life can be cruel but that's how it is You gotta move on You can leave it behind I can't wait forever Now is the time don't be afraid of me I already care so very much Please, be with me.. I promise you, I'll do my best. I'll be good. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Zarina, i really enjoyed the read  Andrew |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Yes, this is really good! I like it, it's really cute, and heartfelt. Hope to see more of your work! Kristin I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
Just let it go Let me care Let me love you Don't worry so much We could be together dancing in the sun.. very awesome zarina!!!.....i loved this...i cant put my finger onto what youre feeling but whatever it is it came though in your poem loud and clear......good job on this woman...i liked it a lot!!!! "Life is not long and boring, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here! I hope you'll be good! hehe very nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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