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Love's Addiction
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0 posted 06-24-2001 06:37 PM       View Profile for Love's Addiction   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Love's Addiction

sorry about this one......i'm really just venting on this.


All these mixed emotions,
I think my head's gonna explode!
Emotions for two different guys,
the hatred for my stepdad.
The love for music,
and the passion for writing poetry.
The love for TWO guys?
how can that be?
I'm so messed up right now,
how can i decide?
I DON'T know!
AAAAHhhhh all this _!
it's making my head spin!
I don't think I can take it any more!
Someone save me from this enfernal place!


I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park


[This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 06-26-2001).]

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1 posted 06-24-2001 07:10 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

sounds like you've got a lot emotionally going on right now......you're young, it's ok to love two guys.....just don't lie about it  
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2 posted 06-24-2001 08:09 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Ah, don't worry about loving two guys. It's when you love three or four at the same time that it gets tricky!   And don't apologize for your poetry, no matter what, alright? Poems are usually lovey and sappy (nothing wrong with those ones!). It's nice to get vents once in a while to shake us up!
Rhonda  

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3 posted 06-24-2001 09:14 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

Nice vent.  It's always good to write when you feel overwhelmed like this.  Nice work.  It sounds like a tough situation.  I wish you the best of luck.

--Marie

You canít expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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4 posted 06-24-2001 10:34 PM       View Profile for Love's Addiction   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Love's Addiction

i was So p.o.ed when i wrote this one. i thought i was gonna punch someone , so what i did was i wrote this. it helped alot. thanks for replying.

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

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5 posted 06-26-2001 12:55 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Nice vent here......I edited a word due to the astrixes....not alloud here  
Anyhow, nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 06-27-2001 07:54 PM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

i liekd the poem...powerful emotions on such different things...some i can realte...hope it gets better ...bye.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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7 posted 06-27-2001 08:13 PM       View Profile for TopGunLauren   Email TopGunLauren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TopGunLauren's Home Page   View IP for TopGunLauren

You express your emotions very well and this is an awsome poem, Keep up the awsome work I hope to read more of your poems.
   Lauren
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8 posted 09-07-2001 03:08 PM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

A great poetic vent. Lots of emotion and you really spark off some creative thoughts. Just watch for spelling errors in the future. It takes away from the piece otherwise.

Thanks for sharing.  

~AF~

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