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fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-06-23 12:29 PM

Moving Picture Boxoffice

I've seen this before
only on moving pictures  (lies lies lies)
What they said to you     it doesn't interest me
You are so lucky          They told me the K was silent (like you couldn't notice)

My evian's reflected in the spring

A transparent transister but my visions too Laissez Faire.
Pay attention to the future, she'll never see me there.

Dreamings of the now raining and shuddering of my broken skin
Watch me lose the pieces my heart's left in
You see the same rain and shudder just as i
i'm sorry it's tearing apart
(in my dream its shredding your heart)
Like in the moving pictures
I would take...the rain as a kiss
            its what brought me here
            so it's how i shall leave

Darkness except for each shimmering torch
illuminated thousand fold by immortal's shows
a road
neither going nor leaving (to you)
a crossroads
diverging with convergence (one circle)
Lie with me one day this circle will be me
Reel of my life
And the magical moving pictures
i made for you
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I'm kinda in a slump here. Sorry

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-23 01:47 AM

please don't be sorry, this is fantastic!

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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2 posted 2001-06-23 09:27 AM

fantastic is an understatement! fabulous work here; i really like your format. keep posting!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-06-23 01:33 PM

Don't be sorry. That's the last thing you should be after producing such an amazing poem. Wonderful work, Oz! I enjoyed this quite a bit.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning ‘round, and I still love you."–James T.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-26 12:32 PM

I loved this poem. You shouldn't think you slumped cuz I'd tell you. Maybe you could have done better in your eyes, but from what I see here it rocked.
I really liked this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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