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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-06-22 10:02 AM

she had a vision in her youth
showing that her lover would be found
seeking shelter in a cove
in the passing of a storm
that she would wait her whole life for

she waited years for this man
turning away all other offers
knowing that her time would come
the chance for her only true love
that would provide for her a child

she felt the bite of the wind on her flesh
tasted the sweet of the air
waiting for her fate to be found
of her one time lover and this child
as a storm brewed outside her shelter

she watched as the lightening flashed
revealing the harshness of this storm
glimpsing finally the shape in her dreams
that shed waited for, for so long
as he searched for a haven from the storm
               ~~~
he saw her sitting in the back
a fire glowing on her flesh
recognizing her to be the one
hed been searching for all his life
to fill the void in his heart

he glimpsed the magic in her eyes
that shown with a life of its own
knowing the truth in an isntant
that his life would pass with the storm
to bring forth a miracle created in her

he knew his fate of this night
witnessed teh truth of it in her eyes
seeing that there was no other way
to change the events  being revealed
that were written down so very long ago

he reached out for her as she did the same
felt the loving desire in her touch
finding peace as they carried out their destiny
the love of each other creating a child
that would one day bring hope to the world
               ~~~
she searched her soul in his arms
already feeling the new life in her womb
dreading teh seconds passing away
that led to the time when he must go
to greet the chilling hand of death

she watched him as he prepared
ready to carry out the plan of fate
kissing him one last time
the love she'd waited for her whole life
to have known only for a few short hours

she cried as she felt his life blood drain
felt the pain as if it were her own
knowing that fate could be cruel
to have given her such perfect happiness
then stolen it back away for itself

she healed and accepted lifes quirks
as she grew with child while the months flew by
hiding the truth of the hope she carried
that would one day bring peace to the world
then her destiny would reach its end

i plan to do a continuatin of this...and it will be about the child and such. btw someone questioned me about his death....if it was suicide or if she had killed him..the answer to that is no. :P thats all ur getting for now.

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"I want to be in another place..."

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 06-22-2001).]

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2001-06-22 10:22 AM

coolioz this me likes! oh man look now i'm talkin like threst of yas awwwwz me happy! btw great poem!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

Love's Addiction
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you

2 posted 2001-06-22 01:28 PM

this was SUCH a good poem! it had a sad ending

but it was soo great. i loved it!

if love wants me, then it can come find me

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
....:::::******:::::....

3 posted 2001-06-22 03:32 PM

this is FABULOUS! I love the storyline and you tell it so well. Wonderful work. Veru different from most of what is posted; i like that.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-22 04:30 PM

Long poem, but I did like it and thanks for clarification at the end. Keep them coming.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-06-23 12:30 PM

Wow... VERY well done, Tiff. I really enjoyed this. These are beautiful words... nice work.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

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