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Pickleweasel New Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 7AL |
Probably basing this on my first post you people might think I'm hung up on some girl. I'm not I just know what it's like to be in that position though. So anyway here it goes. Oh yeah the Paul Bunyon part, I think is sort of dumb but I wrote this for school and had to add metaphores and stuff. Her words are spoken strong and true Like Paul Bunyon and his ox thats blue They can crush you with a mighty blow Or make you happy like a day with no school due to snow They can make you cry and make you weep Sometimes they can cause you to lose sleep She speaks them well, their meanings deep But to no one else you will not tell You lock them up inside your jail If they manage to escape Then she will decide your fate Her love is strong, and growing yes But when you tell the words she said Her love will turn to hate Her wrath is powerful, more than her words but never-the-less Her words are spoken once again |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
~pickle~ hi hi...i remember readin this poem on ur site, and i still think it's pretty. well i'll talk to u on aol n stuff...bye bye luv ya lika ho (lol) -berg- "I know the pieces fit cause i watched them fall away"--TooL |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
interetsing poem...i enjoyed the read...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Interesting indeed  -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very interesting hehe. I liked it! Keep posting.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I'm not going to say it's interesting  I liked this. Very cool.. nice work. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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