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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. 
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I'm going poetry crazy today!! I guess that women who murdered her 5 children is really getting me into this crazy mood, I'm irate with anger!! A lot has been lost, But most has been gained. 4 years of your life, it will never be the same. Graduated with honors, top of your class, never had a problem. Well, no one ever asked. Never knew about the abuse, the hell at which you hold, all inside yourself stuff nobody knows. People never believed it could happen to their own It's hard to understand You can't even be safe at home. *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I can't even breathe right when I think about my kids being hurt.........what that woman did......  I just can't believe a mom could do that..........I have 3 and they make me nuts sometimes, but they are my everything, my world..........and I liked this poem very much......  |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
I don't have kids, but I have friends who have been abused so I just look at that and it bothers me. But for a women, a mother, to take her children's lives!! I mean okay they are blaming on her "depression" and yes I understand completely how she could have felt but when I'm depressed I can never think of taking someone's life. Something seriously had to be wrong in that lady's head!! I mean it's not like it was only one child, it was all 5!! Oh it makes me sick. It really does. Society as a whole disgusts me.  *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
It makes you wonder....if she had been depressed for 2 years...why on God's green earth did she have more babies?! and yes, it's the saddest thing.....parents are supposed to protect their babies....not hurt them..... |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I heard about that woman too. I cannot imagine how the father must feel knowing that if he had been there, it wouldnt have happened. Not that its his fault or anything, but many people end up feeling that way about those events. Anyways, great poem! *~*Amanda*~* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
The first time I heard about that was tonight. I was, to say the least, appalled. I can't believe that a woman could hurt cildren at all, much less her own. It really makes you think what things have come to these days when you can't watch the news without them announcing come kind of violence or killing that happened that day. It's sickening. Very nice poem. The whole flow of the poem was relaly nice, it didn't break at all, and the rhyme scheme was pretty good. Nice work. I enjoyed this read, and I liked the message. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
thi is a sad thing that goes on in this world...where home is suppose tio be a place of love but it replced with hate and abuse...and you wrote this well...thanks for sharing ...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
Your poem is great! The topic you wrote about is certainly fresh in most of our minds now...high school coming to a close... but i get to add to the venting frustration of the group here. There is no way to condone that kind of violence, referring to parent-child. I've had a hard time controlling my reaction to this, but it does need to be noted that depression cannot be blamed for something of such significance. Such an action is so thoroughly against natural impulses that something other than "depression" is certainly at work. I would hazard something more along the lines of bi-polarity, dementia, or full-blown insanity first, but again, all we see is the plea bargain side of what is really wrong. This is such a tragic event, but i hope it changes some opinions in the fields of mental illness. Namely, this woman's doctors had recently changed her prescription, largely a guess-and-check venture. Consequences. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Aww  |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ok hun just breathe and count to ten. ok just remember god is taking care of everything. son't let satan get to you. btw good poem. robin |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one. Seems like all the adive that could have been given was....just keep yer head up....yer heart is a big one, and you'll pull through  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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