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angel_2401
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0 posted 2001-06-21 01:22 PM



You were there for me when he left
You told me you would never go with him
Now I see something hiding
You tell me you like him
But because of that promise
You will never let him know
I cry, because you care for him
You cry because you care for me
You are a much better friend than I was
To someone long ago
I love you for that
And now we will see
How strong our friendship really is

I'm sorry you guys, this isn't my best, but this is my emotions right now. Stace, I know I hurt you so long ago, and I hope you have forgiven me for it. I love you sis! And hopefully this other friendship I have will remain as strong as ours did...

Kristin

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

© Copyright 2001 Kristin Perry - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-21 01:26 PM


This is a tough situation and a very hurtful one..i hope things work out the best and all of you come out of this without being hurt...good poem
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2 posted 2001-06-21 07:00 PM


This is very good.  It seems like a very hard situation, and one in which I wish you the best of luck.  The end note was a very sweet thing to say... I'm sure she appreciated that.  Nicely done, here.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

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3 posted 2001-06-21 07:23 PM


I thought this was really good, right to the point... good job...

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learn what parts of yourself to trust.

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4 posted 2001-06-22 03:21 AM


I liked this one.....hope things can be resolved soon.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-06-22 06:44 AM


very tough situation...i liekd the poem but i hope more everythings turns out alright   ...bye



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6 posted 2001-06-22 07:14 AM


awwwww, girlie!! *hugs* it'll all be alright soon. I promise!! *knocks on wood*

the poem was great too Krissy!!
I wuvs you sissy!!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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7 posted 2001-06-22 09:57 AM


Hey,

I hope everything get better for you soon. The poem is wonderful I like it. Until your next poem

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8 posted 2001-06-22 08:41 PM


I thought this poem was beautifully expressed. I know it's hard to have friends in the middle of situations, but true friends stay together, and that's what is important.  Beautiful read Kris, thanks for sharing.

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9 posted 2001-06-23 10:49 AM


Great work Kris I really enjoyed the read.
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10 posted 2001-06-23 11:46 PM


Hey! Don't worry, it will be alright, one way or the other. SO   (SMILE) lol Ok, so not what you wanted to hear. Well, g2g, so I'll ttyl. Love ya sis!

Cinthya
(If you haven't realised yet it's ME!)lol

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11 posted 2001-06-24 10:40 AM


Oh my gosh, Cinthya!!! Hey!!! I see Stace asked you to come in here too!!! hee hee...

Well, You guys, thanks for all the compliments...  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

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