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Ski*Chick
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0 posted 2001-06-21 12:57 PM


Challenges
We get them in our lives some may get worse then others
My everyday challenge is my life
Even though I look like I’m always happy I’m not
Because of my body it drives me crazy
Everyday I’m put to a new challenge it maybe good or bad
I do not dwell on my disability
It just isn’t fair sometimes
But then I learn more ways of over coming my challenge
I put it off until I can face it
People say I remind them of my dad because I’m so strong
I have many friends who care for me
My family cares for me too
Tomorrow will bring another challenge…..
Minna
June 21, 2001


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1 posted 2001-06-21 01:22 PM


You definately do seem very strong and its good that u can overcome your challenges. Wonderful poem...Good job minna  
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2 posted 2001-06-21 06:46 PM


I really like the message you portrayed in this poem.  You obviously are a very strong person.  I believe each challenge we are faced with makes us stronger in some sense.  I enjoyed this.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

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3 posted 2001-06-21 08:26 PM


I agree with Marie.  The challenges we face today make us a better person for tomorrow.  Keep your head up, no matter what life throws your way.  

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow.  I feel kinda sorry for it...

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4 posted 2001-06-21 10:13 PM


yea...you are strong and i really liked the message in this poem...great job and everyday is  definitly a challenge ...bye

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5 posted 2001-06-22 04:14 PM


Vey nicely done. You are a woman to admire.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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