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MoeRocko
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0 posted 2001-06-21 12:31 PM


You're not my friend, You just like money!


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the_rescue
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1 posted 2001-06-21 02:08 PM


man that poem was just so profound man I mean the way you can interpret it is endless. Just the way you said he wasn't your friend I don't think you could have said it any better, and they money part man that just totally blew my mind, man rocko shakespeare has nothing on you this is good stuff you know what I'm saying hey maybe we could get together and write a 2 line poem sometime wow that would so rock I mean I would be like totally privalaged to work with such genious again good piece, going in my library   ha

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

MoeRocko
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2 posted 2001-06-21 03:01 PM


I'm sensing a bit of sarcasm.....

If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care...  ~John Lennon
  

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3 posted 2001-06-22 03:58 AM


Amazing
the_rescue
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4 posted 2001-06-22 08:38 AM


there is not a sarcastic bone in my body man I'm serious it was great just becuase you did it I mean no one else I think would do it lol. except maybe me lol so when we writing the 2 liner lol

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

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5 posted 2001-06-22 12:07 PM


Interesting...

*~*Amanda*~*

I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.
Why couldn't I stop until I had died?
It was hate

obscurity of cloud
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6 posted 2001-06-22 03:28 PM


cute!  i love writing little bitty ones like this.  great work  

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

never_a_princess
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7 posted 2001-07-06 05:03 PM


lol. "profound" riiight. :P it was..erm..nice. but to get it, if there really is something to get, i think you'd hafta know more about what exactly you mean and junk. ok, i'm done now. bye Ewokz! *hugz*

__o0o_Anna_o0o__ *waves*

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