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MoeRocko
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0 posted 2001-06-21 12:01 PM


You know I never meant to see you again
But I only passed by as a friend
All this time that I've stayed out of sight
Now I started wondering why

You said you didn't need me in your life
I suppose you were right
I never meant to cause you any pain
but it looks like I did it again

Though your pain is now gone
Mine still goes on
inside
Now I know in my heart
I'll never hurt you again

I just wish it would rain
down over me
Let me stand in the storm
Rain down over me


If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon

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1 posted 2001-06-21 04:07 PM


This is very good, Moe!  One of the best I've read from you.  Nice work.  It's a tough situation.  Good luck with it.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

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2 posted 2001-06-21 04:08 PM


this sad   *huggles* ewok!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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3 posted 2001-06-21 04:23 PM


aawww...   I hope you get through this soon. Love can suck,can't it? It's a really good one though, if that makes you feel any better...

Rhonda  

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

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4 posted 2001-06-21 04:41 PM


This post is being closed and placed under review ~ SEA
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