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the_rescue
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0 posted 2001-06-21 09:11 AM


IRONIC POEM,

Light breaks on this new day
the things of yesterday have now gone away
a new hope a future that holds it's own
a future in which I will never be alone

I see you awake there by my side
your everything I dreamed of in you I confide
it's wierd how I never thought I would find you
and now your with me, I know I'll never be blue

Your smile, your charm, your personality
from the day I first met you attracted me
maybe it was the craziness you first showed
or maybe it's how your face just glowed

My angel my everything now part of me
I'll never let you down you just wait and see
together we'll be come all we were ment to be
"it's me and you and you and me
no matter how they tossed the dice it had to be"

So now I'm by your side till death do us part
I'll love you forever more with all of my heart
I will be the man that you always wanted as a child
I'll be comforting, serving and at times hyper and wild

These are the vows I make to you forever more
though the future is vast I don't know what's in store
But I know that with God, you and I
as a team we can do anything if we try

So in finality I love you
and that's all I'll ever do


this is ironic cause it's basically written to my wife, thing is I'm NOT married kinda a future present tense poem lol anyways there it is or was hope you injoyed

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

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1 posted 2001-06-21 09:17 AM


Hey,

     HAha I liked it! It's really sweet, I'm putting it into my library, its one of my fav. from you. Until your next masterpiece

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the_rescue
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2 posted 2001-06-21 09:23 AM


thnx link, most people are gonna think that's crazy lol

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

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3 posted 2001-06-21 09:34 AM


jimmy never knew you thought that way bought me lol! i'm only kidding! it was sweet! gives me an idea!
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4 posted 2001-06-21 10:51 AM


hey that's weird but sweet at the same time. liked it A LOT. keep on writin'.

apsara

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5 posted 2001-06-21 12:17 PM


i liked it...rock on!

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6 posted 2001-06-21 05:19 PM


That was COOL!!!   That's definately going in my library! Until your next!
Rhonda

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7 posted 2001-06-21 08:28 PM


Well, even if you dont have someone to give it to now, whoever you give it too in 5 years will have the same reaction.  TEARS!!

Just carry some tissues in your pocket...

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow.  I feel kinda sorry for it...

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8 posted 2001-06-21 09:54 PM


This was absolutely beautiful.  This is one of the best poems I've read from you.  Whoever receives this should feel very lucky.  Nicely done!

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

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9 posted 2001-06-21 10:09 PM


how sweet is this!!  Wonderful job!

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10 posted 2001-06-21 11:30 PM


great poem...i really liked how youe xpressed this...but it isnt ironic to me..cuz i write poems on bright sides of life...which i havent seen any..etc...you know?...anyways...bye

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11 posted 2001-06-22 03:23 AM


Very nicely done here. I liked this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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12 posted 2001-06-23 12:13 PM


I think that's great.  I know people that write letters to their future spouses and stuff.  I think that's nifty, but I don't do it.  I pray for him though.

dr. jo-bizz

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

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