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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-06-21 08:38 AM


Why can't I find,
my true feelings?
I know I like him,
but what now?
What will help me,
find the answers?
Could he help,
me find real love?
Sensitive and sweet,
but strong and harmless.
That's what I want,
and I found it in him.
There's nothing I don't like,
about his personality.
I love his mellowness,
but then he gets hyper.
And I like his quality,
as a guy also.
He's meant for me,
and I want him to see that!

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
Linc
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1 posted 2001-06-21 08:41 AM


Hey,

     This poem is great! I think its really good, past good and great   Keep up the great work. Until your next poem

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the_rescue
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2 posted 2001-06-21 08:42 AM


awww that's sweet I have the same situation only with a girl lol so yeah I know that feeling its alll good though I liked the poem peace

The rescue

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

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3 posted 2001-06-21 08:44 AM


yeah i her ya i have the same torture from a guy that won't open his eyes and see!
robin
  

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

ethel lahootie
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4 posted 2001-06-21 09:04 AM


i happen to have that prob too! ur not alone!! haha good job w/the poem...hopefully he WILL see...!
good luck and good job
-ethel-

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with you
5 posted 2001-06-21 09:30 AM


shake him up......tell him how you feel  
Fading Away
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6 posted 2001-06-21 03:47 PM


I can SO relate to this!  This is a hard situation, I know.  Nice work... I enjoyed this.  Good luck with the situation.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

LoneWolf
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7 posted 2001-06-21 05:48 PM


this was grea. i absolutly loved it. i can relate to this as well. great job here

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Raven Skye
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8 posted 2001-06-21 07:18 PM


good job, enjoyed this very much

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

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9 posted 2001-06-21 08:22 PM


Great job.  I enjoyed this one.  

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow.  I feel kinda sorry for it...

Love's Addiction
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all around you
10 posted 2001-06-21 11:17 PM


this was a good poem. i liked the read!

if love wants me, then it can come find me

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11 posted 2001-06-22 03:30 AM


Very well done here. i enjoyed this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xEmperorEmber
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tx
12 posted 2001-06-22 04:07 AM


I rape goats
Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2001-06-22 02:20 PM


Hey sweetie, I know it ain't easy, but don't be in a hurry!!   Take it from me......lol....I  should know and you know it!!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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