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Skyfire
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0 posted 06-20-2001 10:01 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Skyfire

Four years...
I can't believe
  That now it's almost time to leave.
All my friends I'm going to miss
  All the times I should've stolen a kiss.
The good times, the hard times,
  The disasterous Socials 11 project on mines...
The smiles, the tears,
  All through the years
I'll remember those things
  (That's when your phone is going to ring).
Thanks you guys, that's all I can say
  I think I'll go now before I cry, okay?

**~To Kyle, April, Amber, Amy, Amy Mae, Jenny, Tiff, Naomi, Sarah, Craig, Miles, Brandy, JC, Ian (even though I didn't hang with you, you hottie), Reena, Kyle G, Tracy, Don, Darcie, Cheryl, Kim, Carlie, Jeanie, Jonquil, and everyone else in my grad class! It's been an awesome time, and I'll miss you all!

~Rhonda (aka: Panda, Charlie, Mojo Jojo, Ronnie, Dano, Sulu, and any other nickname I've aquired over the years)


"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

[This message has been edited by Skyfire (edited 06-21-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-20-2001 10:03 PM       View Profile for stace_co2003   Email stace_co2003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit stace_co2003's Home Page   View IP for stace_co2003

awwwwww, how sweet!!! this is a very sweet poem, and a great dedication. your friends are very lucky to have you!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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2 posted 06-20-2001 11:21 PM       View Profile for ethel lahootie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ethel lahootie

this is very sweet! i loved it!! it made me want to cry!!! good job  
ethel
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3 posted 06-21-2001 12:17 AM       View Profile for xShUgArHiGhx   Email xShUgArHiGhx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xShUgArHiGhx's Home Page   View IP for xShUgArHiGhx

Awww   this was so sad!! Graduation must be tough...Good poem tho  
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4 posted 06-21-2001 12:32 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

this is great....it's always hard to say good bye....no matter the stage in life  
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5 posted 06-21-2001 01:14 AM       View Profile for obscurity of cloud   Email obscurity of cloud   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for obscurity of cloud

this is very expressive.  everyone has to hit that milestone at least once, but you've gone beyond it with this work.  Great job.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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6 posted 06-21-2001 02:15 AM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

sweet...and a great tribute to your friends ...thanks for sharing it...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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7 posted 06-21-2001 08:45 AM       View Profile for Linc   Email Linc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Linc

Hey,

     This is very nice, I hope when I am getting out of school someone writes something like this for me. Until your next poem

       -- Linc

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8 posted 06-21-2001 08:48 AM       View Profile for punkrockerrobin   Email punkrockerrobin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit punkrockerrobin's Home Page   View IP for punkrockerrobin

man why does everyone have to gaduate!
robin
    

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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9 posted 06-21-2001 03:45 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

This is very sweet.  I enjoyed this.  Good luck in the future   Well done here.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down,but the moon is slowly rising...so this old world must still be spinning 'round.And I still love you." -James

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10 posted 06-21-2001 04:54 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Sucks to leave....I'll be doing it soon aswell. Good poem......I relate.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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11 posted 06-21-2001 05:09 PM       View Profile for Raven Skye   Email Raven Skye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Raven Skye

that was so great...i relate, my best friend just graduated...

*״`.*Raven Skye*״`.*
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Don't just trust yourself, learn what part

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12 posted 06-21-2001 08:16 PM       View Profile for Heavens Tears   Email Heavens Tears   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Heavens Tears

Awww.  This year my school will have its first graduating class.  Too bad I'm just a sophmore. Anyway, this was a great poem to all your friends.  

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow.I feel kinda sorry for it...

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13 posted 03-04-2003 11:46 AM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Great Writing
 
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