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Goodbye |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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Four years... I can't believe That now it's almost time to leave. All my friends I'm going to miss All the times I should've stolen a kiss. The good times, the hard times, The disasterous Socials 11 project on mines... The smiles, the tears, All through the years I'll remember those things (That's when your phone is going to ring). Thanks you guys, that's all I can say I think I'll go now before I cry, okay? **~To Kyle, April, Amber, Amy, Amy Mae, Jenny, Tiff, Naomi, Sarah, Craig, Miles, Brandy, JC, Ian (even though I didn't hang with you, you hottie), Reena, Kyle G, Tracy, Don, Darcie, Cheryl, Kim, Carlie, Jeanie, Jonquil, and everyone else in my grad class! It's been an awesome time, and I'll miss you all! ~Rhonda (aka: Panda, Charlie, Mojo Jojo, Ronnie, Dano, Sulu, and any other nickname I've aquired over the years) "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." [This message has been edited by Skyfire (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
awwwwww, how sweet!!! this is a very sweet poem, and a great dedication. your friends are very lucky to have you!  I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
this is very sweet! i loved it!! it made me want to cry!!! good job  ethel |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awww  this was so sad!! Graduation must be tough...Good poem tho |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is great....it's always hard to say good bye....no matter the stage in life |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
this is very expressive. everyone has to hit that milestone at least once, but you've gone beyond it with this work. Great job. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet...and a great tribute to your friends ...thanks for sharing it...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is very nice, I hope when I am getting out of school someone writes something like this for me. Until your next poem -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
man why does everyone have to gaduate! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very sweet. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the future Well done here.--Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sucks to leave....I'll be doing it soon aswell. Good poem......I relate.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
 that was so great...i relate, my best friend just graduated...*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Awww. This year my school will have its first graduating class. Too bad I'm just a sophmore. Anyway, this was a great poem to all your friends. *~*Amanda*~* |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great Writing |
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