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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
when you said you loved me, Did you mean it? when you said you weren't cheating, Did you mean it? and when you said you never felt this way before, Did you mean it? or were you saying all those sweet things, To see my heart melt? or were you doing it for sick pleasure?.................. Did you truly mean those things? or are they............just words? fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
There's always those doubts, but you have to get past them and see the truth, whatever that may be. I hope they're not just words  Good job on the poem "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aawww.... Why the confusion in the world? That's sad. I hope they aren't just words, and I hope you get through this. Good poem, as usual. Rhonda  "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Well...I think everyone feels this way at times. I know I do. Ecspecially after a breakup. Great write here. I enjoyed it alot. I love reading your posts. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very well expressed through questions and thoughts...i enjoyed this a lot ...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
VERY well done. You expressed yourself well. I can relate to this one... Good job. I enjoyed this. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
 Dude, I Loved this one. I really like all your work. I just don't know which post to read first! we should collab. sometime  If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well written. I thought this was great and so very true. I've felt like this many times before.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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