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LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2001-06-20 08:29 PM

“But A Dream”

Happiness surrounds
As I feel your tender touch
Pervading all the senses of man
Leaving me victim to your love

A joyous moment
While I hold you near
Being so close to you
Has released all my fears

All my sorrows depart
As I gently caress your face
For once I feel as though
I’ve finally found my place

Upon the concord paths of life
Once lead in solitude
Is now guided
By the beating of our hearts

Then the morning sun shines through
As I remember you are with the one
Of whom you swore your hate
And I begin to cry
For everything before
Was but a dream

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-21 01:56 AM

great poem...i relate to this

...as i dream of this also...i enjoyed it alot...great job!...bye

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-21-2001).]

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
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2 posted 2001-06-21 08:51 AM

Hey,

The poem it superb I enjoyed reading it. Until your next poem

-- Linc

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punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2001-06-21 08:53 AM

jolly good job!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

4 posted 2001-06-21 04:19 PM

thank you for your replies.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-06-22 03:17 AM

Superb job here! i really liked this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

6 posted 2001-06-22 12:05 PM

Dreams always leave you wondering, "Why couldnt it be real?!" But anyway, great poem. It was very beautiful!

*~*Amanda*~*

I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.
Why couldn't I stop until I had died?
It was hate for myself, buried inside.

[This message has been edited by Heavens Tears (edited 06-22-2001).]

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

7 posted 2001-06-22 10:17 PM

aww this was so sweet i liked it a lot and i really hope everything works out for you

one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live

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