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My Thomas |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. 
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So I wrote this at 4:00, usually my 4:00 poems have more big words and make a lot more sense...but this one lacks creative energy..BUT HEY I was tired!! Sometimes I think, about long ago, how naive I was, everything I didn't know. You came into my life, showed me the ropes. Without you being there, how did I ever cope? You promised me the world but you lost it all. You left me stranded, you left me to fall. It was hard to trust. So hard to replace. Then I would feel so horrible, when I had to look you in the face. We met up again, but it was friendship first. In your mind, you always seemed to know the love that we both thirst. So we tried again, just for another broken heart. It wasn't our choice. Breaking up just wasn't smart. So we tried AGAIN. Third times a charm. My world revolves around you, So I figured there's no harm. When I'm with you, my heart, it does race. And every single night I wait for your embrace. But around your friends, I just don't feel right. I feel you forget me I really think you might. I mean if I'm trouble or in your way.. Just please tell me I'll surely go away. I know you don't want that But you told me to be honest No matter what happens, In my heart, you'll always be my Thomas... *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is such a beautiful poem, Raven. Not bad at all for a 4:00am poem. This one hit hard... Good luck with Thomas. I hope things work out. Nicely done here, I enjoyed this. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here......beautiful poem. I loved the ending.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
sweet ending i loved it! robin  |
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