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5_sweet_kisses Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 49 |
Sunsets and ocean waves cannot compare to the serentity I see in your eyes. The intriging presence of being with you down the trials of life move me, Quiver in a bundled mesh anticipation. Like the sweetest sound you have ever encountered and you long to encounter it once more... just one more time." Heh, you know who you are, and you know what I'm talking about     [This message has been edited by 5_sweet_kisses (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
peekers had a baby woohooo and it dances ow ow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I like this. It's very sweet. I'm sorry if I opened a fresh wound by my unedited reply. I know how it feels, trust me. I know how much it hurts... but look at it as not a loss, but a gain. It's true when they say, "Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all."  Keep that in mind. I really enjoyed this.--Marie "Imagine a pageant... In my head the flesh seems thicker, Sandpaper tears corrode the filth, And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair [This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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5_sweet_kisses Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 49 |
Thanks Marie, but you mean past, we dont have it anymore but it's all good  Peeker |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea this was short and sweet. Very nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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