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The Smell Of The Warm Summer Air
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The Smell Of The Warm Summer Air |
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Elusive^ Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 18dancing fairy land |
just bored..mere, dusty musings..*yawn* ________________________________ I am writing aimlessly. Inhale, I'm suffocating Escape, memories cling Ruthlessly. Stared at the stars Wondered the amount Of desperate wishes Flung ardently skywards Clung for dear life On to Flickering, distant Striking Historical flames. Smelled the warm summer air Laughed. It's a mere façade Warmth flourishes from cold Then fades, devoid of MERCY A remaining icy breeze Howls through Souls. ''I'll TAKE a QUIET life..a HANDSHAKE of CARBON monoxide with NO alarms AND no SURPRISES..'' |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
pretty cool  |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
VERY nice work. I enjoyed the imagery here. I liked this quite a bit. Keep posting all your work. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done here. i really liked this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice poem...great job!...enjoyed the read...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
very cool very cool! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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