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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This was an actual dream that I had had one night. I was bored in class one day and just kind of turned it into a poem. So yeah...just thought I'd let you know. Waking inside my nightmare I know I’m all alone Walls of piss and blood Danky little rag-tag room I can feel the evil here, tapping on my walls and swarming around me ....ready to kill Something far away whispers, “must be the devil here” Screaming without a sound I saw them all walk away But they were never there at all Something lethal whisper, “it’s inside you” Running towards the door I stop at a pool of blood A drop falls from above, staining my white dress I look up and see myself looking right back Paler than a corpse and black laughing eyes The blood dripped from her mouth Then suddenly the blood puddle below my feet caught fire and she began to laugh I screamed as the fire burned my flesh But it was not for my flesh that I cried, I cried because I felt my soul being devoured by her eyes Then as the fire weaved itself into my skin, and I began to breathe its rage – I woke up “Phoenix” May 2001 "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
?What did you eat before bed? Gross.....very vivid poem here......very scary.....so, good writing.....very effective. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Haha...just a product of my mind. Beautiful, isn't it?  "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice work! This is an awesome poem. I enjoyed your imagery. Thanks for sharing this, and keep sharing all your work. Nicely done. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL I had a dream that would put this to shame....I know about scary dreams....  |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
scary! Quite the nightmare you have there, but i think it's a good thing to turn it into a poem. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Oh there's more where that came from. lol You should share sometime, SEA.  Thanks "...if you want love you must be love.." Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins Freedom comes when you learn to live unafraid. [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you wanna peek at my wicked dreams... LOL maybe someday I'll find a poem for it, but I don't know that I could...... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very intense writing...giving me chills, eh?...great job!...i enjoyed this greatly ...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
this was quite.....interesting.........i actually thought it was very describtive..nice job.  fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Duh it was descriptive LOL....very well done. I found this to be very intrigueing.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
all robin gots to say is ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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