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ethel lahootie
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since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

0 posted 2001-06-18 08:19 PM

um...i dunno bout the title...its a place...that reminded me of the poem...enuf said

Fire flies light the way on
fresh cut greens of the
15th hole
Porch lights are filled
with bugs whose wings
flutter
Whispers come from the
well known screened in porches
While heat and humidity
surround and sooth
Summer love lasts forever
But only in a night
For tomorrow I’ll be
gone

i was going to continue the poem but when i re-read what i had so far it seemed finished...please give any suggestions or comments on this...thanks

~eThEl~

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stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
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1 posted 2001-06-18 08:58 PM

I LOVE IT!!!!! it's cute...it reminds me of summer days at my grandma's house *sighs* the good ol' days....

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

Isabel Galaxia
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Posts 733

2 posted 2001-06-18 10:10 PM

Nifty!!! Umm...I don't know ur email address!!!!!

Bel

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3 posted 2001-06-19 02:29 AM

I liked this one. Not as good as some of your others, but nonetheless wonderful.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

ethel lahootie
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since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

4 posted 2001-06-19 11:11 AM

thanks everyone...
bel-afrochicka77@hotmail.com
thanks again

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5 posted 2001-06-19 09:44 PM

This was pretty good. Not my fav by you, but still good. Thanks for sharing it with us.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

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6 posted 2001-06-20 12:24 PM

nice poem...i enjoyed the read

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

ethel lahootie
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since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

7 posted 2001-06-20 12:08 PM

thanks for replyin u guys

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