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Teen Poetry #4

Simply Charmed

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-06-18 06:59 PM

Sweet as candy,
and just as nice.
In my life,
he fills with spice.
He makes me happy,
whenever we meet.
And when he holds me,
together our hearts beat.
I've hurt myself,
'cause I've fallen for him.
And I just want it to be,
just us two.
I can't resist him,
him and his simple charm.
'Cause when I'm with him,
I feel safe from harm.
Our lips pressed together,
in a passionate kiss.
My heart finally filled,
with this wonderful bliss.
I truly love you,
and I've made no mistake.
A gorgeous relationship,
we're about to make!

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-18 10:37 PM

Well, I wish you happiness with your super guy

~SEA

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2001-06-18 10:40 PM

spine grinder-
very beautiful thoughts here..

you've penned them well.
i wish you the best..

smiles,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-19 01:45 AM

Well done here. I enjoyed this a lot. It was a very sweet post!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-06-19 03:18 PM

Wow, this is a beautiful poem. Your thoughts and emotions are wonderfully put onto paper. You're lucky to have this person in your life... cherish what you have with him. You never know what might happen. Nice work, I enjoyed this.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

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