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So Hard to Say
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So Hard to Say |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
I've let you down again You made me pure with your love I've said words get in the way But I never can find a way To ask you not to go away I can't tell you everything is ok All these times I've only wanted you to stay But everytime I try, it's so hard to say I've realized that I haven't realized how a love like your's can be so free Is it just me? I let go of your hand and built my castles in the sand but now I'm reaching out again To my precious God I pray I want to be your clay Your arms around me shape me with your love place me in your heart to stay I Love You and all these times I've only wanted you to stay But everytime I try, it's so hard to say... If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
This is edited... I screwed up the last 2 lines on the other one  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I closed the other thread of the same poem. This is the one you edited, so I am assuming this is the one you want left open. In the future, please edit your poem instead of double posting  You edit by clicking on the paper and pencil icon at the top ~SEA |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I liked this one a lot! You are writing very good stuff lately! Keep them coming.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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