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the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-06-18 02:47 PM

words could never express what my heart feels right now
you allowed him to take your life and use it against us some how
he came in and played you like a board game
and when it's done we only curse your name
you hurt her you took away what was pure
you hurt her mother how to look at you she's unsure
her father you crushed like a bug under your shoe
and her brother you left wondering what to do

A family who must choose between there daughter and son
where and why in the world has this battle begun
I see you cry the tears are so real
but what exactly do you feel
I don't blame you for it was the father of lies
but I can't stand to hear your mothers cries
your fathers pain is to much to bear
but in the Midst I know HE is still there

Pain confunsion anxiety and distress
all caused by pleasure just look at this mess
I feel the tears as they roll down your face
do you think that you are the disgrace
I see the pain in the deepest part of your eyes
though you act strong i see throught he disguise
I know her words hurt as she says them to you
but you killed her insyde what do you expect her to do
The little girl sits not knowing what's going on
all she knows is that mommies happiness is gone

Why,
Why did you listen to the Father of lies
Why,
Why did you allow yourself to fall to compromise

My heart breaks for the girls mom, as well as for you
but remember the GOD of love will see you through
Pain will continue and the words will fly
I know at times you'll want to die
don't fall, please don't turn away
you God doesn't leave, he's here to stay.
"lean no on your own understanding"
and don't fall to what this world is demanding.

Dude I love you all more than words do explain
I know what you feel I know the pain
to the girl she is left in the hands of the King
for the mother look at the hope tomorrow can bring
for the father be the Dad God wants you to be
as for the brother I will be fine you'll see

I had a really really rough weekend this basically explains what is raging through my mind right now you know what I mean, maybe not peace

The Rescue

I'm not asking you to love me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say I'm not asking you to hate me I just want you to relate

[This message has been edited by the_rescue (edited 06-18-2001).]

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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1 posted 2001-06-18 02:49 PM

Wow, there were a lot of good emotions displayed here and I really enjoyed the read.

Zu

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-18 03:26 PM

so much emotion...i enjoyed it a lot...and liked the way you told them...but hope things are alroght

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dr. Jo-Bizz
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since 2001-06-06

Posts 97

3 posted 2001-06-18 05:34 PM

wow...
i liked this, i liked the degree of emotion and passion you put into it. I think some of the things were repeated maybe too often... i guess i could be a little more suscint (sp?)... but still good.

dr. jo

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

4 posted 2001-06-18 06:23 PM

hey i really liked this godd job and i hope everything is ok! *hugz*

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-06-19 01:35 AM

Yea a lot of heartache in this one. The title said it all. Very well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

6 posted 2001-06-19 12:53 PM

hun i love you you're like a big brother to me i known for a while now and you know i'm, always here for you so if you need anything you get a hold of me and vent okie babe.
*smooches jimmy*
robin

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-06-19 05:07 PM

Wow... Full of power and emotion. This was a very good poem. I enjoyed it. Keep posting all your work.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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8 posted 2001-06-19 07:21 PM

this has so much emotion. the rhyme scheme changes a lot, but i like the poem overall.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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