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TopGunLauren
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0 posted 2001-06-18 02:51 AM


        Anger
        My heart is filled with anger
             But who cares?
           Obviously you don't
        Because you just sit there and stare.
      As I pace back and forth u just sit there
          But never ask me why.
       You make me feel like I'm nothing
        Because of you I feel like I should die.
     Every night I come home and cry myself to sleep
         But I won't let you see my tears.
    Even though your the one who causes them      
      And even if you knew you would never be here.
       You call me your friend but your not mine
         Because a friend would be here for me.
                  And you never are
       But who knows maybe some day you will see.


I wrote this because for the most part that describes my life but no one ever notices.And that hurts me more then anyone will ever understand!

    
  

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1 posted 2001-06-18 04:33 AM


aww :-( i'm sorry.  this was a really good poem, sometimes when you're mad just writing helps.  i do that a lot, even if it is just to rant.  i hope you feel better soon, and keep postin all your stuff :-) later.
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2 posted 2001-06-18 09:22 AM


Aww I'm sorry that you feel this way, but people usually notice most are just to uncomfortable to talk. Anyway great work, I really enjoyed the read  
Zu

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3 posted 2001-06-18 02:32 PM


wow!!..this hit home...i can relate...this is what iw as exactly going through and a lot of my poems say this...i enjoyed it greatly...and this sitaution is ahrd but stay strong and it'll alll get better...trust me  ...bye Lauren

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4 posted 2001-06-18 03:39 PM


I usually feel like people don't notice me, period. So i just randomly vanish and never tell people cuz I don't think they care....and I go unheard of for weeks. I always forget to tell them where I'm going. I find it amusing. Oh sorry..yes the poem.
The poem, yes I could relate to it very well. I enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-06-19 01:50 AM


This is a good poem.  I'm sorry you had to write it... no one should feel this way.  But I enjoyed it.  I hope you feel better.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

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