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A walk through the stars
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A walk through the stars |
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~*~butterfly~*~ New Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 6MN |
A WALK THROUGH THE STARS I walk threw the stars Searching for answers Searching for you Missing your love Confused by words Trying to forget Trying to be smart Remember last summer Yea you hurt you bad Why do I go back For more… I walk threw the stars Searching for why Searching for love Searching for me Its all repeating Why do I do this To me You are a drug Sometimes good Mostly bad But your love Oh god I miss your love… I walk through the stars Thinking Ill do anything Anything for more of your drug Oh god you are great You keep me coming back More and more… Those eyes God what eyes… I can feel it Its all happening again… Why do I Set myself up again And again… As I look to the future All I see is myself Walking through the stars… Searching for more reasons… And to find myself In a twisted cycle… Only to continuously feel the pain of the drug I will love forever… "When faced with a challenge look for a way, not a way out." |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Wonderful piece here! I can REALLY relate to the feelings you've written about. No matter how you get hurt, you just can't stop, can you? Same here! These thoughts are beautifully expressed, and this format works really well. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awesome poem here!!! Wow, the way you expressed this poem was so awesome. I loved it very much. Impressed here! Beautiful joB!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
wow...this was great! i know EXACTLY how you feel. it's a crappy feeling, but it's better to have loved once then not at all...or something like that. anywayz...awesome poem. this one is definetly going n my library. hope to see lots and lots more from you. later! -fear- |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Kasandra, this is a beautiful poem. Truly a library piece. This one hit very hard. It's hard to let go, huh? Your thoughts are portrayed beautifully here, and your words are very impressive. Wonderful job! A simply outstanding show of talent. Very well done! --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful poem...i liked it alot and the imagery was nice  ...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
WOW this was simply amazing...I so totally feel you here...and it sucks. When you get dumped on you think "i will never let that happen again" but sometimes something inside of that person posseses something stronger than your mind and its hard to resist. I loved this one.... ~Nikki~ |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
Wow. this was great. i loved this one. awesome job It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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~*~butterfly~*~ New Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 6MN |
THANK YOU GUYS SOOOOOO MUCH!!!!! im SORRY i havent gotten around to some reading... i just got back from a vacation. i got A LOT of catchin up to do this weekend!!! you guys are cool and thanks a TON for all the positive feedback!!!! i appreciate it "When faced with a challenge look for a way, not a way out." |
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