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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-06-17 11:14 AM


I miss you . . .
I miss holdin’ your hand
I miss playin’ with your hair
I miss talkin’ to ya about everything
I miss seein’ you everyday
I still love you so
And I always will
I cry when I read your letters
I miss you so much
I miss the way you smell
I miss the way you hugged me
I can’t wait to see you again
To hear your voice again
To be able to hold you again
Sweetie, I miss ya so much!


Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

© Copyright 2001 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Isabel Galaxia
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1 posted 2001-06-17 11:16 AM


I think I know exactly what your talking about...hehe
Good job

Bel

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2 posted 2001-06-17 12:17 PM


Hey,

     Tamma, this must be my favorite of all your poems! I am not quite sure just why I like it so much but, I do. Its wonderful, keep up the great work. Until your next poem

                       -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Ina
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3 posted 2001-06-17 12:17 PM


This was good Tamma. Not your best though. Thanks for the read.

Regina

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

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4 posted 2001-06-17 05:39 PM


This was a sweet poem tamma....I wish you the best of luck with everything.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~*~butterfly~*~
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5 posted 2001-06-17 07:19 PM


wow.... yea i think a lot of us in here can relate to this one!!! keep up the great works!!!

"When faced with a challenge look for a way, not a way out."

~kass~

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6 posted 2001-06-18 12:20 PM


This was very sweet, and all too familiar of a situation for me, and, I'm sure, many of us.  Good job... not the best I've seen from you, but still a good read.  Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

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7 posted 2001-06-18 09:48 AM


This was another great poem from you Tamma as usual, well done  
Zu

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8 posted 2001-06-18 02:36 PM


nice and sweet poem...i enjoyed the read...hope everything works well...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

vlraynes
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9 posted 2001-06-18 10:45 PM


Tamma-
  very lovely and loving thoughts..
  i really enjoyed this one.
  
  smiles,
  ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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