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little_krazy_poet
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0 posted 2001-06-16 03:53 AM


i saw a bunch of my old firends.  and when i was there i saw the girl that is in this poem.  i came to find out later that she still likes me.  and that i still have firends

she my friend
this is true
she is part
of our crew

we’ve been firends
for many years
being with her
i have no cars no fears

but one day
we were sitting down
just all alone
on one around

i put my hand
over her shoulder
and she did the same
i just sat and held her

she turned to me
i turned to her
all the while
emotions were a stir

i felt something grate  
and i’ll tell you this
that,  that was...
my vary first kiss

i saw a bunch of my old firends.  and when i was there i saw the girl that is in this poem.  i came to find out later that she still likes me.  and that i still have firends  (any way that was where i wrote this poem and that is why i haven't posted in a while) hope you like it

WRITE WHAT YOU FEEL!! AND DON’T LET ANYONE TELL YOU TO DO OTHERWISE

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Spice
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1 posted 2001-06-16 01:56 PM


Nice read Krazy.
Keep posting!  

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2 posted 2001-06-16 01:58 PM


beautiful picture ...i loved the last verses...great job! ...bye

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3 posted 2001-06-16 03:30 PM


Awwww!  That's so cute!  Hehe.. nice post.  The picture put in my mind from this is sweet.  Good job.  Keep posting all your work.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection.  Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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4 posted 2001-06-17 01:08 AM


Great job here.....and congrats on the kiss! I liked this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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