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MoeRocko
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0 posted 2001-06-15 02:20 PM


I realize you're seeing someone new
I don't believe he knows you like I do
The temperamental moody side
The one you always try to hide for me
But I know when you have something on your mind
You've been trying to tell me for the longest time

But before you break my heart in two
There's something I've been trying to say to you

But the words get in the way
There's so much I want to say
But it's locked deep inside
and if you look in my eyes, we might fall in love again.

I start to cry before we even say goodbye
You're heart has always been an open door
But I feel I don't know you anymore
Despite the fact it's hurting me
I know the time has come to you free

There's so much I want to say
I try to say I love you
But the words get in the way

                     ~ Gloria Estefan


Castles made of sand, slip into the sea eventually...

Fall mountains, just don't fall on me.

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Ina
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1 posted 2001-06-15 05:06 PM


This was good. what about Gloria Estafan(spellled it wrong i know)
MoeRocko
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2 posted 2001-06-15 06:09 PM


Gloria Estefan wrote this song called "The Words get in the Way"   Very Beautiful song  

Will It matter in the end?

Fall mountains, just don't fall on me.

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3 posted 2001-06-16 04:12 PM


I love that song.  It's a very pretty song.  One of my favorites.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection.  Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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4 posted 2001-06-16 09:23 PM


Is this her song tho?

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

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5 posted 2001-06-17 12:50 PM


so what is the point of this poem/song...is this your or is it hers...and why is her name there and huh?...i dunno...need some explanation...yea!...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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6 posted 2001-06-17 01:10 AM


Great job here. I enjoyed this one a lot.....it actually inspired me to write a poem. Thanks.....beautiful job here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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