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nikki813
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 15
PA, USA

0 posted 2001-06-15 11:11 AM

You've made horrible decisions
now it's time to pay the price
you've been having all the visions
the punishments precise

you've ignored all the guilt
the walls have grown higher
the walls of trouble that you built
are nothing to admire

the parties coming to an end
with one exit in sight
you're with but only one friend
the noose is getting tight

the friend that remains is trouble
betrayed you from the start
buried your soul in the rubble
of others broken hearts

as your life is quickly ending
you look back and see
the messages you've been sending
of pain and misery

just one more chance you beg and plead
but all to no avail
you've dug your grave, youve done the deed
accepted that you've failed

youre life draws to a lonely close
you know the bad you've done
you want to tell both friends and foes
you're not the only one

others out there suffer too
so help wherever you can
there is so much that you can do
just reach out and lend a hand.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-15 12:39 PM

I can hold my hand out....but will it be accepted?! I remain hopeful......

with my hand ever extended

I know what this feels like

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-06-15 05:03 PM

Perhaps we ought to have a poem written in a users point of view....Ill help.

This was also very good, i noticed anger though.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-16 03:15 AM

This was great......I liked it. Well done here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-16 03:21 AM

i liked this one...true in some ways

...great job!...byeW:ave:

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-06-16 03:38 PM

I liked this a lot. Nice work. I agree with Regi. Maybe we should read one from a users POV. Nice work.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

6 posted 2001-06-16 03:50 PM

Great work I really enjoyed the read. keep sharing

Zu

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